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Excellent....to our ownselves keeping true...but first, knowing true...that is one of life's greatest challenges.
posted by
Krisles
on June 24, 2015 at 7:03 PM
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v1
this poem is you and i enjoyed it very much.....more should realize that they march to their own drummer and that is ok.
posted by
overtherainbow
on June 24, 2015 at 12:33 PM
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Re: Vt
Naut, thanks for reading. Actually, I had a little different idea for this poem but same
theme. So yeah, I just tried to keep a rhythm flowing and it came to me. I thought this
way the reader would get a better idea what makes me tick.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 22, 2015 at 5:54 PM
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Re: FSI
Thanks for reading. That poem spoke for a number of relationships. Yes, they're over.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 22, 2015 at 5:49 PM
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Pretty witty. I think there must be lots of men like that.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 21, 2015 at 6:58 PM
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Got to experiment V. Not with young ladies I hope.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 21, 2015 at 12:08 PM
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Vt
A neat 'dialogue'...I'm wondering whether you ordered the lines intentionally to conflict with the 'natural' rhythm of the words, to increase the sense of 'dissonance' between the two... 
posted by
Nautikos
on June 20, 2015 at 6:27 AM
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You have me wondering what will happen next between them. My gut tells me it is over for good.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 20, 2015 at 5:52 AM
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At least you le 'em know exactly as it is with you and that I admire.
posted by
Kabu
on June 19, 2015 at 4:20 PM
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