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i am so glad i did not start at the beginning of this story, this was sooooo funny i was howling.  now i will go back and read the story from the beginning.  some of what we write we think is from experience, when as time goes on the experience changes and so the story does to.  what difference since none of us are really here, and this gave me a good laugh, that is good for the soul

posted by overtherainbow on June 23, 2015 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re:CCT

 Thanks. Honestly, a ''number'' of people didn't like the direction the story was

 going in, or the theme. So, out of respect I cut the story short and gave it a fictional

 ending filled with satire.

 

posted by Vermont01 on June 3, 2015 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Chuck

I respect your opinion and thank you, for being honest. Have a good night.

posted by Vermont01 on June 3, 2015 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

I suppose if one could use humor to ease heartbreak, it would be worth marketing.

 I hope you are not screwing this up tight to break a painful memory albeit probably the

  wisest choice. Or perhaps you are pulling a plonker and Dee Is now Mrs V. Very good though V. I liked it.

posted by C_C_T on June 3, 2015 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

I agree with Kabu. Don't concentrate on the money situation. You may lose some readers that way. 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on June 3, 2015 at 8:53 AM | link to this | reply

And we live our stories

posted by BC-A on June 2, 2015 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Vermont

 Wiley, thanks for the advise. I don't know, it sounds like I may only get one viewer

 on that. But again, thanks.

posted by Vermont01 on June 2, 2015 at 5:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: A bit disapointed.

 Kabu, I am very sorry you are disappointed in that. I am sincere when I say this.

posted by Vermont01 on June 2, 2015 at 5:47 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Vt

 Naut, thanks for both the comment and the advise.

posted by Vermont01 on June 1, 2015 at 8:02 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FS

 Thank you, for the comment.

posted by Vermont01 on June 1, 2015 at 7:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re: VT01

 Krisles, thanks I took negative energy and turned it into creative energy. I have

 used the spell check in the past. I'm sure it's obvious when I do.

posted by Vermont01 on June 1, 2015 at 7:58 PM | link to this | reply

Vermont

Well you've had an attempt at writing romance I suppose, no love in you but that isn't so unusual  in todays world. Go write something else, maybe, a study on free hookers.

posted by WileyJohn on June 1, 2015 at 6:46 PM | link to this | reply

A bit disapointed.

This ending for me is a total disjointed , unrealistic slap at your readers who have felt that money had become the all important theme in your life. It reads like a bad dream.

posted by Kabu on June 1, 2015 at 6:43 PM | link to this | reply

VT01

Well, I have to say that was a hoot....and the two of you would certainly have made a pair!LOL!  OF COARSE (lacking delicacy, taste, or refinement; unpolished... per dictionary) there was never any indication you had any feelings for Dee beyond her well-formed rear - so I can see why the idea of marrying her would bring on a nightmare!  But, still, someday I hope you'll fess-up and tell us what your whole thing with not wanting to get married is - now that would probably make a great story!

This, however, was one of your most entertaining stories yet...but dear Naut is nuts to think the ladies would love it because you had this little fit.  I can say I love it because it is so clever, and funny....and some of your best writing (IMHO), showing a lot more about you the man. Bravo!  And I can tell you did use spell check, it's just that "coarse is perfectly good word,just not the right one,  so it passed....sometimes you just have to take the often repeated HINT!!!!!!!!!!!!(and if I am ever allowed to write honestly again, you must feel free to harpoon me, too!)

posted by Krisles on June 1, 2015 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

A very clever ending to this series you have there. I enjoyed reading it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on June 1, 2015 at 4:43 PM | link to this | reply

Vt

LOL! This was really fascinating - and all the Blogit ladies will be proud of you! But there are still a few spelling errors to be dealt with...

posted by Nautikos on June 1, 2015 at 4:22 PM | link to this | reply

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