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i am so glad i did not start at the beginning of this story, this was sooooo funny i was howling. now i will go back and read the story from the beginning. some of what we write we think is from experience, when as time goes on the experience changes and so the story does to. what difference since none of us are really here, and this gave me a good laugh, that is good for the soul
posted by
overtherainbow
on June 23, 2015 at 1:39 PM
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Re:CCT
Thanks. Honestly, a ''number'' of people didn't like the direction the story was
going in, or the theme. So, out of respect I cut the story short and gave it a fictional
ending filled with satire.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 3, 2015 at 5:01 PM
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Re: Chuck
I respect your opinion and thank you, for being honest. Have a good night.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 3, 2015 at 4:53 PM
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I suppose if one could use humor to ease heartbreak, it would be worth marketing.
I hope you are not screwing this up tight to break a painful memory albeit probably the
wisest choice. Or perhaps you are pulling a plonker and Dee Is now Mrs V. Very good though V. I liked it.
posted by
C_C_T
on June 3, 2015 at 12:51 PM
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I agree with Kabu. Don't concentrate on the money situation. You may lose some readers that way.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on June 3, 2015 at 8:53 AM
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And we live our stories
posted by
BC-A
on June 2, 2015 at 8:31 AM
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Re: Vermont
Wiley, thanks for the advise. I don't know, it sounds like I may only get one viewer
on that. But again, thanks.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 2, 2015 at 5:49 AM
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Re: A bit disapointed.
Kabu, I am very sorry you are disappointed in that. I am sincere when I say this.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 2, 2015 at 5:47 AM
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Re: Vt
Naut, thanks for both the comment and the advise.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 1, 2015 at 8:02 PM
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Re: FS
Thank you, for the comment.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 1, 2015 at 7:59 PM
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Re: VT01
Krisles, thanks I took negative energy and turned it into creative energy. I have
used the spell check in the past. I'm sure it's obvious when I do.
posted by
Vermont01
on June 1, 2015 at 7:58 PM
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Vermont
Well you've had an attempt at writing romance I suppose, no love in you but that isn't so unusual in todays world. Go write something else, maybe, a study on free hookers.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 1, 2015 at 6:46 PM
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A bit disapointed.
This ending for me is a total disjointed , unrealistic slap at your readers who have felt that money had become the all important theme in your life. It reads like a bad dream.
posted by
Kabu
on June 1, 2015 at 6:43 PM
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VT01
Well, I have to say that was a hoot....and the two of you would certainly have made a pair!LOL! OF COARSE (lacking delicacy, taste, or refinement; unpolished... per dictionary) there was never any indication you had any feelings for Dee beyond her well-formed rear - so I can see why the idea of marrying her would bring on a nightmare! But, still, someday I hope you'll fess-up and tell us what your whole thing with not wanting to get married is - now that would probably make a great story!
This, however, was one of your most entertaining stories yet...but dear Naut is nuts to think the ladies would love it because you had this little fit. I can say I love it because it is so clever, and funny....and some of your best writing (IMHO), showing a lot more about you the man. Bravo! And I can tell you did use spell check, it's just that "coarse is perfectly good word,just not the right one, so it passed....sometimes you just have to take the often repeated HINT!!!!!!!!!!!!
(and if I am ever allowed to write honestly again, you must feel free to harpoon me, too!)
posted by
Krisles
on June 1, 2015 at 4:56 PM
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A very clever ending to this series you have there. I enjoyed reading it.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 1, 2015 at 4:43 PM
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Vt
LOL! This was really fascinating - and all the Blogit ladies will be proud of you! But there are still a few spelling errors to be dealt with...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 1, 2015 at 4:22 PM
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