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I came back again today. I love this poem.

posted by Justi on April 25, 2015 at 11:50 PM | link to this | reply

Re: adnohr

Don't become over sensitive adnohr, I shall be afraid to write of you and your brother scrunching rhubarb. Yes Archie is a good friend. I think.  His married life is how he described it . A pain in the ass, but we need them.

posted by C_C_T on April 25, 2015 at 10:27 AM | link to this | reply

Archie is a professional groucher, it seems.I do believe he worries about you. Lovely poem, once again. I could practically smell the dust in that attic.

posted by adnohr on April 25, 2015 at 3:51 AM | link to this | reply

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It always seemed a bit cruel Taps we had canaries as Kids but one even dropped dead from heart failure, we were hollering at each other. I guess it made us feel guilty.

posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:24 PM | link to this | reply

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posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Thanks Naut, it is always difficult to know what a true reaction is to anything, I wonder if Jimmy is OK.

posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:21 PM | link to this | reply

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Well Taps I like trying out new flowers to support my charities  with cut flower sales .

Not so much fun growing cabbages.

posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:18 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I should not like to come back as any caged bird...

No perhaps a Do Do, Pat. Yes I like raised gardens a lot of plants are ruined by marauding Tom cats  on nightly spraying visits.

posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:16 PM | link to this | reply

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Well Kabu surprisingly no aches or pains this morning only heart ache of course.

posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:13 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CC

Well to be honest Justi some are old poems that I take and reconstruct . I think when one first writes anything it probably needs a fresh look or in some cases just  discarded. Thank you.

posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: ChiffChiff

Well I felt better with less Bro anyway thanks for the advice. 

posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:08 PM | link to this | reply

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Thanks FS. You would not want a carwash of Archies.

posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Archie

Well A. he is certainly better since his wife pulls his strings, but moaning is his forte.

posted by C_C_T on April 23, 2015 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

Is Archie ever in a good mood?  Memories tug at our heart strings and pry open the door we thought long shut inside of us

posted by Annicita on April 23, 2015 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

 Boy that Archie seems like a grouch. I agree with many of the comments, that was

 quite the poem.

posted by Vermont01 on April 23, 2015 at 7:29 PM | link to this | reply

An interesting exchange with Archie...I like the conclusion that of which the speaker arrived at in the poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 23, 2015 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

ChiffChiff

Maybe you'd feel better if you didn't mess with cutting down your pills Bro.

posted by WileyJohn on April 23, 2015 at 5:31 PM | link to this | reply

CC

I had to go back to that lovely poem again and yet again, that is beautiful. Your work is awesome. I do not understand how you do so much but I am so proud of you, and your poetry is just beyond magnificant.

posted by Justi on April 23, 2015 at 5:23 PM | link to this | reply

lets hope the flower containers work well. You and Wiley are a pait. Naughty pair of old blokes , no patience to wait and then complain cos you ache and feel unwell.

posted by Kabu on April 23, 2015 at 4:58 PM | link to this | reply

I should not like to come back as any caged bird...

but I do like thinking about all the sweet-sad old things. A raised garden is just the ticket for backs no longer young and all that flexible.

posted by Pat_B on April 23, 2015 at 2:38 PM | link to this | reply

Raised gardens, gardens of any sort, and gardening season and weather always make me feel excited, even though I'm not doing much of the gardening myself now.

posted by TAPS. on April 23, 2015 at 12:22 PM | link to this | reply

CCT

This again is superb! I had the sensation one gets when entering an attic full of outworn, sad and dusty memories...

posted by Nautikos on April 23, 2015 at 12:06 PM | link to this | reply

In my Grandpa's day, they used pretty little canaries to test the air in the coal mines.  If a miner saw a canary dead in its cage, the miners vacated post haste.

posted by TAPS. on April 23, 2015 at 12:02 PM | link to this | reply