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Re: Re: Re: Kabu,
A special piece of art you have created, love in your heart is beautiful.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 15, 2015 at 9:12 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu,
I do know but I keep letting myself down and Oh dear. Talk about knocking my head against a brick wall. Sigh
posted by
Kabu
on April 15, 2015 at 5:55 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu,
I do know but I keep letting myself down and Oh dear. Talk about knocking my head against a brick wall. Sigh
posted by
Kabu
on April 15, 2015 at 5:54 PM
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Sometimes the dream is too perfect Ciel. I love your poem though. Every one wants to be loved, but they also want someone perfect at least in their eyes.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 15, 2015 at 10:10 AM
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Ciel
Such a perfect title for such a perfect poem
posted by
Krisles
on April 14, 2015 at 10:31 PM
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posted by
Annicita
on April 14, 2015 at 6:04 PM
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Yu are an excellent poet. I enjoyed reading your poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 14, 2015 at 5:00 PM
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Human beings often have so much in common, and yet they can feel so alone and like no one has ever experienced what I feel.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 14, 2015 at 3:23 PM
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That is so beautifully done and yet so sad. I felt this way before I experienced a new birth in Christ many many years ago and now there is no fear, loss, pain associated with love. 
posted by
Justi
on April 14, 2015 at 2:09 PM
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Re: Pat,
I put this here, in part, because a lot of people behind their own walls need to know they are seen and acknowledged, and not as alone as they feel. As you say, it's an 'at times' kind of thing for many of us, but for some, it's the base-line, the door-knob to which their suspenders are hooked, just like in a cartoon, that always snatches them back.
posted by
Ciel
on April 14, 2015 at 12:10 PM
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Re: Naut,
That's a great victory, having made such a leap!
posted by
Ciel
on April 14, 2015 at 12:08 PM
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Re: Kabu,
Sometimes we have one end of the stick, sometimes we are holding the other. I am realizing that if someone is angry with me, it does no good to try to placate or absorb the punishment they want me to bear. How they see the world is not necessarily how the world is, even when we have to deal with their truth. We absolutely must not lose sight of our own!
posted by
Ciel
on April 14, 2015 at 12:07 PM
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Wow, I've felt this at times, but never put it into those exact words.
Thank you!
posted by
Pat_B
on April 14, 2015 at 11:41 AM
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Ciel
Thank you for an amazing poem! You have put in words thoughts that are not strange to me, though I have overcome them by a magic quantum leap...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 14, 2015 at 11:14 AM
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I feel sorry too...mostly for the son who cannot accept me. For the poisnoned grandchildren for the silly waste land and deset where there should be fields of mutual love.
posted by
Kabu
on April 14, 2015 at 11:12 AM
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