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I love how you keep building on the story without giving away too much of it.  Look forward to the next entry.

posted by Annicita on April 12, 2015 at 9:13 PM | link to this | reply

The trouble with stories on hear K .Is no one remembers what it is about previously.

 I am sure this could be quite a good fantasy read if we knew or remembered how it started. I have struggled with stories quite a few times and finally gave up. However if you like doing it, that's fine. It just seems a lot of effort for little reward.

posted by C_C_T on April 12, 2015 at 12:00 PM | link to this | reply

A very gripping tale, I find this to be. The characters are making for an excellent story.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 12, 2015 at 9:45 AM | link to this | reply