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great stuff...your dialogue is always so real and you are portraying very deep emotions here superbly. Good writing girl.
posted by
Kabu
on April 1, 2015 at 6:23 PM
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PatB
So interesting and well written love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 1, 2015 at 5:22 PM
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Ah I love this! It makes me feel all good inside! You are a master storyteller, Pat-B!
posted by
adnohr
on April 1, 2015 at 4:26 PM
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easier to discern the characters...nice job
posted by
Annicita
on April 1, 2015 at 12:22 PM
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Yes you have improved on this story, it is beginning to form nicely, it does take time to recheck situations and make characters stand out.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 1, 2015 at 11:07 AM
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Pat
What can I say? I'm really enjoying this, quite apart from the fact that it's so well written...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 1, 2015 at 8:55 AM
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It gets better all the time.
posted by
TAPS.
on April 1, 2015 at 8:54 AM
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