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TAPS
🌸Aah a traditional touch, ballad like, a poetic tale that all makes for a nice enjoyable poem love. BC-A, Bill’s R🌸🌸st
posted by
BC-A
on March 10, 2015 at 7:41 AM
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Today I felt that I was in Wales.
posted by
Kabu
on March 9, 2015 at 11:52 AM
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TAPS
You're really bringing to life an ancient world...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 9, 2015 at 11:46 AM
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TAPS
Yes, these are the kinds of stories I love to read....and you so stir the creative juices.
posted by
Krisles
on March 9, 2015 at 8:40 AM
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And yet again, very nice....
posted by
Vermont01
on March 9, 2015 at 6:13 AM
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The anticipation that something like that could happen today would be very unnerving. Reading your poem reminds me that things can change in an instant.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 9, 2015 at 5:33 AM
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Again, this is wonderfully evocative. And a clarion call for more, please.
posted by
Pat_B
on March 9, 2015 at 5:25 AM
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Yes a poor job if one was a bit deaf and didn't hear the warning as enemies approached.
Onr should not stray far from the watch tower, I seem to remember this in my past/
posted by
C_C_T
on March 9, 2015 at 12:23 AM
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