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sorry archie is a pain in the arse
posted by
Lanetay
on March 13, 2015 at 4:21 PM
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Babies having babies,,,Sigh! and all on welfare ofcourse.
posted by
Kabu
on March 3, 2015 at 4:25 PM
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I think it may be safe to say that some women are just not meant to be proper mothers! Yes, very unhygienic! And I think I too would have been able to pick out either of my sisters on FaceBook . . . if I had a mind to join. But I don't . . . 
posted by
JimmyA
on March 3, 2015 at 5:42 AM
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Re: Wiley
Yes Bro , I might try my hand at being a dummy detective.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 11:23 PM
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Re:Justi
So glad that you feel fit enough to participate Justi. It felt like something was missing.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 11:21 PM
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ChiffChiff
Good for you Bro cleaning that kids dummy and then trashing it the second time.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 2, 2015 at 4:00 PM
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CC
The first part is so true. Things are so dirty compared to 'once upon a time'. Oh I loved the poem. It is so good to be active on here again. I missed reading and writing more now.
posted by
Justi
on March 2, 2015 at 12:06 PM
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Re: Clever moms tie a string to it...
Yes I would imagine so but not too long or it might get twisted around their necks. Didn't the mothers in the past use a little bag of sugar. Before your time probably. I suppose the writer hopes a poem will whisper through a sensitive mind. No use putting it on Face book.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 10:16 AM
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Re: CCT
Well some are so young Naut they look like they should still be sucking a dummy. Evidently that phase has run its course younger girls seem to realise it is a one way drift to boredom. Well so my sister says. The girls think the poem is sad.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 10:12 AM
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Re: cct
As long as it does not strangle itself Jean. I suppose it was sad, we all suffer from such feelings at tmes.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 10:08 AM
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Re: FS
I hope they are much cleaner when they leave F.S. I expect you get a bit of flotsam.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 10:04 AM
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Well you tell me Kabu perhaps she did not know much about babies, one night stands do not give one much experience if one is sweet sixteen
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 8:10 AM
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I must remember that advice Taps it should be on a large notice for mothers to read. I must look at the last line I keep forgetting, what a rabbit.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 8:08 AM
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Re: Purple Purse
I is not difficult if one is under stress PP. Kind of a double vision of events and wondering which is the right one, well something like that. If it's any comfort I have felt similar illusions.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 8:06 AM
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Re: You're right, dirt was cleaner years back.
Cheers Pat I remember my younger brother crawling around with a mouse in his mouth.
I was two years older and thought it was funny.My memory Pat I can't remember the ending.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 8:01 AM
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Re: Vermont
Well sir I am going through old poems and trying to cut out anything too vague. We all write lousy stuff at times and it is only by listening to intelligent people that one can gauge a reaction. I hate it when folk say it is good when one does not agree.One gentleman used to criticize on here it was painful but that's life.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 2, 2015 at 7:56 AM
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I think ''Thorn Woman'' is one of your more impressive poems that I have read.
posted by
Vermont01
on March 2, 2015 at 7:12 AM
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You're right, dirt was cleaner years back.
Any day now, they're going to revoke the 6-second rule. I love the thorn woman poem, especially the surprise ending. And the two nests with nine blue eggs.
posted by
Pat_B
on March 2, 2015 at 3:38 AM
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The poem to me is hauntingly familiar. I see myself sometimes as if I were seeing someone I did not know.
posted by
Inside_The_Purple_Purse
on March 2, 2015 at 3:18 AM
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You always manage to have a really great last line for your poems.
I agree with Kabu. That child needs a ribbon on her dummy pinned to her clothing.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 1, 2015 at 10:56 PM
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Good for you re the dummy. Why doesn't she get one of those ribbons and pin it to the child's clothing.
posted by
Kabu
on March 1, 2015 at 6:41 PM
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I see a lot of germy things happen with customers at the car washes...As always, an excellent poem you got there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 1, 2015 at 6:11 PM
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cct
i have also seen mothers put the binkie in their own mouths to clean them off, but i like ciels idea of a ribbon tied to the stroller no to the baby or around his neck but just long enough to go the the babies mouth.
the poem, i usually do not comment to much on the poems, but i agree this is a hauntingly sad poem.
posted by
jeansaw
on March 1, 2015 at 4:32 PM
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CCT
The woman in the supermarket is annoying; but your poem is hauntingly beautiful...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 1, 2015 at 3:52 PM
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Clever moms tie a string to it...
just in case the kid spits it out or swallows.
The poem moves me, and makes me a little sad for the Thorn Woman and the Wandering Sparrow.
posted by
Ciel
on March 1, 2015 at 11:49 AM
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