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Wonderful poem but I especially love those blue pajamas.

posted by Justi on November 20, 2014 at 7:57 AM | link to this | reply

TAPS

You did it again.....brilliant Haiku....you're going to inspire me to try writing again!!  You got so very much into this one!!  The "jerk" that I hate is one that I became familiar with late in life.  I never had to struggle with drowsiness at work until late in life.....fighting sleep at the desk is miserable, and in meetings it is agony.....and that "jerk" and instant disorientation of realizing that you fell asleep when you didn't know it.......wow......

posted by Krisles on November 19, 2014 at 10:59 PM | link to this | reply

TAPS

Oh how I identified with that love.

posted by WileyJohn on November 19, 2014 at 5:55 PM | link to this | reply

Something of the Myoclonic variety, I see.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 19, 2014 at 4:18 PM | link to this | reply

I hate when that happens. Scares me every time.

posted by Pat_B on November 19, 2014 at 3:07 PM | link to this | reply