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Something tells me that the published end will be fuller than what we rad her with more twists. Well sone clever talented Lady Pat.

posted by Kabu on October 26, 2014 at 2:48 PM | link to this | reply

PatB

I'd love to read the published version, complete Pat. Make it happen

posted by WileyJohn on October 26, 2014 at 2:40 PM | link to this | reply

Has this been sent out looking for publication yet? I don't mind knowing the ending - I still want to read it.

posted by adnohr on October 26, 2014 at 1:16 PM | link to this | reply

nice job pat

posted by Annicita on October 26, 2014 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

You write so nicely Pat, you really should have published. Sadly not much money in it today unless one can hit the jack pot or be ghosted.

posted by C_C_T on October 26, 2014 at 12:17 PM | link to this | reply

Pat

As always - very well written...

posted by Nautikos on October 26, 2014 at 9:06 AM | link to this | reply