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PatB
Well written so that the readers mind can run free to interpret characters,
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 15, 2014 at 6:48 PM
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now I can see the kids jaws it the floor and their eyes pop right on outta their heads...More potatoes just when they wer thinking he don't know our Mam....Oh but you are writing a superb tale here.
posted by
Kabu
on October 15, 2014 at 1:50 PM
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Well not a bad trade peas for a nice supper. Are the kids still at home?
posted by
C_C_T
on October 15, 2014 at 10:27 AM
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Oh I love this
I can see the expression on the faces and feel the tension in the air.
posted by
Bel_Marshall
on October 15, 2014 at 8:26 AM
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Pat
The dialogues are purr-fect! 
posted by
Nautikos
on October 15, 2014 at 5:24 AM
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