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I avoid using adverbs...they can be annoying

posted by Annicita on October 19, 2014 at 8:43 AM | link to this | reply

I avoid using adverbs...they can be annoying

posted by Annicita on October 19, 2014 at 8:40 AM | link to this | reply

Characters need their own voice

But make sure the editor remembers, without you, these characters would not have a voice at all.

posted by Bel_Marshall on October 15, 2014 at 9:09 AM | link to this | reply

I love the title for this post.  LOL

posted by TAPS. on October 14, 2014 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu,

posted by Kabu on October 14, 2014 at 5:10 PM | link to this | reply

Like young cops - too much respect for the rulebook, without looking at the meaning of the content.

 

posted by adnohr on October 14, 2014 at 6:34 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu,

Right, it would have challenged some editors not to make it over too much.  Young ones, stuck on The Rules.

posted by Ciel on October 13, 2014 at 8:36 PM | link to this | reply

I had to take a lot of the Australian coloquialism from "Tom Ugly" so people could understand it but as you know I kept some ther to keep the authentic flavour...give my story some reality juice.

posted by Kabu on October 13, 2014 at 6:44 PM | link to this | reply

Re: FormerStudentIntern,

And the story itself, as well.

posted by Ciel on October 13, 2014 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Pat,

I will be fine, as long as the editor listens to me, and respects that it is my story.  

posted by Ciel on October 13, 2014 at 4:52 PM | link to this | reply

Exactly. It is essential that each character has one's own voice.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 13, 2014 at 4:45 PM | link to this | reply

Sounds like you're a bit frustrated. Count to ten...

posted by Pat_B on October 13, 2014 at 2:45 PM | link to this | reply