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No not Haiku but it is lonely work....Ofcourse you miss son and Phil. when they are away.
posted by
Kabu
on October 5, 2014 at 5:49 PM
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TAPS
Sounds positively eerie, LOL! But I'm sure you'll keep an eye on the place, and if necessary you can always call the Ghostbusters...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 5, 2014 at 1:09 PM
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You are doing a great job describing what is going on right now in your poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 5, 2014 at 9:29 AM
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As if life really stops when loving ones are gone
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on October 5, 2014 at 8:12 AM
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It's not haiku, but it works!
Love the idea of deer balanced on hind legs reaching for apples.
posted by
Pat_B
on October 5, 2014 at 4:57 AM
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You poor thing I suppose we miss things that we take for granted. Never mind I expect you will receive a nice present when they return. You could have a gentle go on the swing, not too high though.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2014 at 12:54 AM
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