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wow
I'm putting all your lovely comments on the wall for inspiration!!!!
posted by
poetjpb
on January 26, 2004 at 7:25 PM
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bite-size poem
your bite-sized poems are truly wonderful and deeply-thought and felt, and you seem to be "seeing" the world through the senses,,, I wouldn't be surprised if you wrote haiku, tanka or haibun on the side?
I do, actually, and I may start a haiku blog, come to think of it!
Best,
Kissling
posted by
writelover
on January 26, 2004 at 3:09 PM
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I agree - you've managed to invest a lot of meaning in this - it's almost a haiku in its intensity.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on January 26, 2004 at 10:26 AM
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Very short, but meaningful.
posted by
Star5_
on January 26, 2004 at 10:09 AM
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