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shamasehar...that does sound very fitting..

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posted by Rumor on July 18, 2014 at 8:33 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks, FSI....

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posted by Rumor on July 18, 2014 at 8:32 AM | link to this | reply

Jimmy, yes, distraction is the main killer, I agree...

"Distraction" would probably be the crew foreman of this bunch....

posted by Rumor on July 18, 2014 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

This poem and the last post remind me of a town I saw on the southern tip of my country devasted by cyclone and remnants of the past strewn all around.

posted by shamasehar on July 18, 2014 at 12:25 AM | link to this | reply

I like the haunting imagery.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 17, 2014 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

CCT..thanks....

You may see more and maybe a short story or two, eventually...

posted by Rumor on July 17, 2014 at 3:36 PM | link to this | reply

Yes, there were a few around the area where I grew up. And the guard rails didn't seem to help all that much. For me, the key word in this poem was distraction. Bad curve or no, that would be the real killer . . .

posted by JimmyA on July 17, 2014 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

Eek! I would not want to drive a donkey along that road. You are becoming the master of creepy poems.

posted by C_C_T on July 17, 2014 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply