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LOL, I am glad you could visualise this poem CC. Ok I shall try some time to make this longer but my left brain could only hand out this much to me ..
posted by
shobana
on July 10, 2014 at 11:51 PM
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Hi Shama, something similar here too and thank you.
posted by
shobana
on July 10, 2014 at 11:48 PM
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Yes I guess so BIll and Hello
posted by
shobana
on July 10, 2014 at 11:44 PM
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Thanks Naut
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shobana
on July 10, 2014 at 11:43 PM
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Yes FSI, meant to be a lesson in an invasion unprepared.
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shobana
on July 10, 2014 at 11:35 PM
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ha ha, thank you Kabu
posted by
shobana
on July 10, 2014 at 11:29 PM
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Ahoy there me hearties....See you have got me right involved in your poem Congratulations. And i love the picture too.
posted by
Kabu
on July 10, 2014 at 6:35 PM
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The reader feels as though one is in the midst of the turmoil.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 10, 2014 at 9:52 AM
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Shobana
Good one! And yes, I've been to sea and love it...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 10, 2014 at 9:37 AM
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I guess find the rightful treasure love.
posted by
BC-A
on July 10, 2014 at 8:02 AM
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You set the stage perfectly.I could feel the force of the winds and the stormy sea.Well liberty is a very high stake to put in a gamble.This poem reminds me of an incident in Mahabharata,where Yudishtra lost everything (kingdom even his wife) while gambling with his cousins.
posted by
shamasehar
on July 10, 2014 at 4:10 AM
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I think this could be made longer Shobana a real adventure it seems the Monarch of the Island gave in too easily. Perhaps one day you could work a bit of action into the poem,
I know you do not like violence but no one gives up liberty easily.I can see your pirates creeping up the shores cutlasses glinting in the blazing sunshine.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2014 at 1:42 AM
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