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TAPS

Great fun!

posted by Nautikos on May 4, 2014 at 6:07 AM | link to this | reply

Oh the sights ans sounds of spring in this one! Love it!

posted by calia14 on May 3, 2014 at 10:58 AM | link to this | reply

None of the students in Ms. Olman's Poetry 101

Could do half the job on Haiku that you have done.

posted by Pat_B on May 3, 2014 at 4:31 AM | link to this | reply

Hey stop them Taps they are all copying you. Very nice one  .

posted by C_C_T on May 3, 2014 at 12:08 AM | link to this | reply

Some feel good haikus.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 2, 2014 at 5:13 PM | link to this | reply

No Maple leaves here

No green trees, nothing at all

Spring not Sprung...not yet!

posted by Kabu on May 2, 2014 at 4:56 PM | link to this | reply

I like the maples one especially!

The maple by my front deck is in full bloom... soon the sea of green will hide the mountain.

 

Maple in full bloom
A sea of green will follow
Obscuring mountains

posted by Ciel on May 2, 2014 at 4:11 PM | link to this | reply