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thanks chuck...it was so creepy

posted by Annicita on April 10, 2014 at 1:56 PM | link to this | reply

Such a good imaginations 

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on April 10, 2014 at 9:46 AM | link to this | reply

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posted by Annicita on April 9, 2014 at 10:15 PM | link to this | reply

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thanks...it was how i was feeling 

posted by Annicita on April 9, 2014 at 10:14 PM | link to this | reply

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amazing!!!!

posted by Kabu on April 9, 2014 at 3:11 PM | link to this | reply

Yes you snuck this one in nicely A. Very realistic..

posted by C_C_T on April 9, 2014 at 1:02 PM | link to this | reply

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thanks..it really was freaky

posted by Annicita on April 9, 2014 at 12:48 PM | link to this | reply

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i was composing this poem and all of the sudden i saw that grey eye...freaked me out...i ran to get pen and paper expecting to be holding onto the bldg so it wouldn't leave

posted by Annicita on April 9, 2014 at 12:47 PM | link to this | reply

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thanks justi...was a quick one to write

posted by Annicita on April 9, 2014 at 12:42 PM | link to this | reply

I like the symbolism behind the gray cloud.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 9, 2014 at 11:59 AM | link to this | reply

I love this too along with Justi darling....Portending evil.

posted by Kabu on April 9, 2014 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

Brings out loads of feeling and emotions. Good work.

posted by Justi on April 9, 2014 at 7:02 AM | link to this | reply