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Wow, I remember so many days like that with Beverly, until we fell apart and the sun came out, terrific writing TAPS.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 28, 2014 at 7:10 AM
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I hated those feelings. That emotion can eat you right up. You've expressed it perfecty.
posted by
adnohr
on March 22, 2014 at 2:48 PM
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I like how you repeat the last line twice...You do a gray job at describing a gray and gloomy scene.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 22, 2014 at 11:00 AM
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