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Well done! I had to think about this one for a while - is there always a kind of fear embeded in desire? 
posted by
Nautikos
on March 6, 2014 at 12:01 PM
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So very into the mind of awoman. This is so good. I still am always amazed when I read your work. Be blessed.
posted by
Justi
on March 5, 2014 at 7:31 PM
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I wonder how many people live with those regrets...At times, I have not wanted to feel...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 5, 2014 at 11:47 AM
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I guess desire is robbing her of insight Jay. Unless you can explain it differently.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 5, 2014 at 11:05 AM
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I like the line
about treading awkwardly through her love
posted by
jollyjeff
on March 5, 2014 at 9:50 AM
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