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What a wonderful, warm poem! And it even brought back memories, for I too have known such doors...
posted by
Nautikos
on February 5, 2014 at 6:20 PM
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Well done indeed.
posted by
UtahJay
on February 5, 2014 at 4:00 PM
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I've read many poems over the years of 'something' being witness to the change of seasons - a tree, a building, a fencepost, a stone wall - but never a set of Dutch doors! Very nice, and very heart-felt . . .
posted by
JimmyA
on February 5, 2014 at 1:09 PM
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A very sepcial poem from a very special poet/writer. I felt the poem moved as it should through seasons and time and the end is absolutely as it should be.
posted by
Kabu
on February 5, 2014 at 1:04 PM
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It is something how the seasons fly on by.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on February 5, 2014 at 12:43 PM
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Very nice Ciel how poetry should be written with a love of the
moments and gentle movement in this case through time.
I was born in a long trailer that had a door like that only
the top was glass four small windows.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 5, 2014 at 11:45 AM
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Beautiful.loved it.🌹
posted by
shamasehar
on February 5, 2014 at 10:40 AM
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I love it.
It reminds me of my mother's type of writing....makes me so nostalgic.
Great!
posted by
TAPS.
on February 5, 2014 at 10:02 AM
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I absolutely love it. Especially "now has not forgotten then."
Wonderful image.
posted by
Pat_B
on February 5, 2014 at 9:48 AM
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