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The Pretender
Sublime spookiness
posted by
2Philomena
on January 4, 2014 at 7:26 AM
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i'm understanding it more as i've come to it early am on a peacefilled sunday morning. i myself side with the LIGHT powers. GOD, ANGELS. they're much more powerful than any darkness.
posted by
Carolyn_Moe
on December 29, 2013 at 6:03 AM
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I guess you are not feeling too happy with mankind Joe. Sometimes out of the bitterness comes sweetness. Something similar used to be on a tin of syrup showing bees emerging from a dead lion.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 29, 2013 at 3:48 AM
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Some intense imagery there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 28, 2013 at 4:01 PM
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i don't claim to understand poetry as a general rule but this poem sounds deep. keep writing. 
posted by
Carolyn_Moe
on December 28, 2013 at 3:22 PM
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