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Well hang in there Jay, I wonder if you are sad because of your trees.
Why should any comment cause bitterness, he who is innocent
can throw the first stone. I wish you would try for some happy poems
or even comical. We all have our doom laden thoughts .
I know you have suffered more than most, I always think
of the sad things you have revealed.To sad to mention here,
but you just seem to drag yourself back here to be tortured.
You cannot do everything right, poetry is fantasy, once I felt
probably like you that it was life itself, because it was in fact
another world to escape to and forget reality.
We are complex creatures, any way glad to see you are staying a bit longer. 
posted by
C_C_T
on December 14, 2013 at 1:52 AM
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I like the metaphor of the moonbeams dying...I am glad to read that you are staying.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 13, 2013 at 7:31 PM
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Utah
I'm glad you're staying! And your comments have never caused me any pain and bitterness...
posted by
Nautikos
on December 13, 2013 at 7:13 PM
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posted by
Kabu
on December 13, 2013 at 4:39 PM
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