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Hi Sinome the princess
It has pathos, poignancy and a sad heart that is so touching! Be well my friend.
posted by
anib
on December 23, 2014 at 4:25 AM
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Sinome
QThe lines here print nicely love. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on May 20, 2014 at 2:25 PM
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This is so true
I've felt this way before
It has happened many a time
It always hurts
Thank you for sharing
posted by
versebyJess
on January 25, 2014 at 7:12 PM
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Footprints
Poignant imagery.
posted by
2Philomena
on January 4, 2014 at 7:28 AM
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I like the reverse invocation of the washing out
posted by
Straightforward
on January 4, 2014 at 6:46 AM
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Such sweet melancholy is something only you can evoke xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on December 30, 2013 at 4:54 AM
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The love is always there
and can never be washed away and like the wave it will always return to you again and again reminding you of neverending love.
posted by
skye08
on December 23, 2013 at 8:24 PM
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As Your waves came in...
They reached the shore of my heart,
Washed over my thoughts,
My mind,
My dreams.
And reminded me that love was still possible...
Even for a scared heart like mine.
The scars, they do not fade,
But perhaps they help to keep someone from
ever taking a moment of love for granted again.
Thank you, sweet girl.
posted by
ForeverPoet
on December 18, 2013 at 8:46 AM
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lovely...
posted by
Annicita
on December 1, 2013 at 6:54 AM
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Sinome
This poem reminds me of some of my fondest memories, of strolling along a lonely beach, listening to the surf... 
posted by
Nautikos
on November 28, 2013 at 9:05 PM
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I just stopped by to wish you a Happy Thanksgiving and to tell you what a wonderful poet you are.
posted by
UtahJay
on November 28, 2013 at 12:22 PM
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To roll back time one would have to control the elements. I don't think those footprints are really destroyed or we would not see them as we read your poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 28, 2013 at 10:56 AM
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The beach with the waves rolling in always refreshes me with the continuity ...endless eons of sands and time. somehow it makes me feel that whether I am here or not...before I came, after I am gone...life on earth goes on.
posted by
Kabu
on November 28, 2013 at 7:46 AM
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The stories that go behind them...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 28, 2013 at 5:25 AM
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This is lovely xoxoxoxox
posted by
lionreign
on November 28, 2013 at 2:31 AM
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