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Well done Jay quite an atmosphere you have created here. 
posted by
C_C_T
on November 22, 2013 at 2:43 AM
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You are all so kind.
posted by
UtahJay
on November 21, 2013 at 11:47 PM
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Superb! Bravo! xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on November 21, 2013 at 9:30 PM
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poor little boy. I just want to pick him up and hold him tight ....make it all alright. which means this is so well written that I lost myself in the words.
posted by
Kabu
on November 21, 2013 at 7:45 PM
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Utah
You're making that boy's sense of muted dread reach out to us...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 21, 2013 at 6:17 PM
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I like the way in which the imagery flows in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 21, 2013 at 5:08 PM
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Aunt Dora's Haunted House
The very name Dora gives me the creeps. The poem appeals to all the senses and in that way transports the reader into the spooky place succesfully.Some readers might say 'Speak for yourself', and I would answer, 'That is exactly what I am doing.' Some people might say 'That ain't no poem at all', and I would say 'So what? it is prose,beautiful prose'.
posted by
Setaki
on November 21, 2013 at 12:12 PM
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