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wonderful poem utah...keep up the great work
posted by
Annicita
on November 17, 2013 at 8:28 AM
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gripping
posted by
Lanetay
on November 17, 2013 at 8:06 AM
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Utah
A poem like an etching, with every line drawn where it fits perfectly...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 16, 2013 at 9:00 PM
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wonderful Jay...Thank you.
posted by
Kabu
on November 16, 2013 at 5:32 PM
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UtahJay
Great read pard.
posted by
WileyJohn
on November 16, 2013 at 5:27 PM
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As always
well done. "strong and sturdy words piled to the sky.." really liked that
Be well
-WhiteHat
posted by
WhiteHat_TroubleMaker
on November 16, 2013 at 5:17 PM
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You do a great job at conveying the emotions to the reader.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 16, 2013 at 11:51 AM
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I wish there were more folk on this poetry site Jay. It feels like you are tearing your heart out for a truly worthy cause. Perhaps you are having a run of memories entwining with the present whatever it is something to save and in the future look back on with awe I shouldn't wonder.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 16, 2013 at 11:45 AM
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