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I go one better than Annicitta...this is five star.

posted by Kabu on November 12, 2013 at 3:20 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Annicita on November 12, 2013 at 2:12 PM | link to this | reply

Sweet like the heartsongs of an angel

Sometimes someone comes along that can lay their heart upon the page so beautifuly that all the other poets can do is wipe the tears away. Words cannot express the beauty that you've laid down...and so I thank you, sweet one. If someone hurt you on purpose, it was a greater crime than they could ever have known...angels should never cry.

                                                                       -ForeverPoet

posted by ForeverPoet on November 12, 2013 at 12:51 PM | link to this | reply

Those memories can keep us going...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on November 12, 2013 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

Sinome

Nice - but I do wonder what's going on up there, LOL...

posted by Nautikos on November 12, 2013 at 10:04 AM | link to this | reply

No, this is beautiful, we are poets of the heart, and sad is one of those things we try to explain, and if by chance we can make someone feel as we felt we have done our job, and here you have done your job beautifully.

posted by UtahJay on November 12, 2013 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

melancholy as romance comes through your fine lines love.

posted by BC-A on November 12, 2013 at 7:57 AM | link to this | reply

You feel the ghost-like quality of life Simone this would be beautiful if it were not so sad.

posted by C_C_T on November 12, 2013 at 12:14 AM | link to this | reply