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Pat
Well done scene...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 7, 2013 at 8:31 PM
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That was my Daddy, Eyes in the back of the head, LOL
posted by
Kabu
on November 6, 2013 at 5:37 PM
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nice....isn't it yada yada yada?
posted by
Annicita
on November 6, 2013 at 2:51 PM
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Pat...
You set up a story so nicely and the dialogue flows so well..looking forward to more....
posted by
Rumor
on November 6, 2013 at 1:40 PM
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The gate-keeper
He did not only have eyes at the back of his head; he had a complete face. This is what flashed through my mind while reading this story. Janus would be an apprpriate name for the character in your story.
posted by
Setaki
on November 6, 2013 at 12:40 PM
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I am looking forward to reading more.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on November 6, 2013 at 12:01 PM
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nice dialogue
flowed very well for me. Keep it coming!!
posted by
WhiteHat_TroubleMaker
on November 6, 2013 at 10:41 AM
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Well, of course, I had to go read about the triangle fire.
I love reading you.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 6, 2013 at 8:09 AM
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She sounds wonderful; Pat. admittedly for some of the reasons mentioned . I like this story.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 6, 2013 at 7:59 AM
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