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Catching up. I had to read this before I read today's excerpt.
posted by
TAPS.
on November 6, 2013 at 8:05 AM
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Nice feel to the story Pat, I hope you can keep it rolling.
posted by
C_C_T
on November 4, 2013 at 11:55 PM
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Pat
Excellent! One little thing - Italians are extremely reluctant to bring up la Cosa Nostra (Our Thing) even as a joke, which it would probably be the case here, since he's a Northerner, LOL...
posted by
Nautikos
on November 4, 2013 at 6:15 PM
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nice write...always feel as if i am there
posted by
Annicita
on November 4, 2013 at 4:34 PM
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hey this is good writing and you have my interest more and more. I like the love interest you have introduced.
posted by
Kabu
on November 4, 2013 at 4:23 PM
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You do that quiet passion so well!
I definitely look forward to reading more.
posted by
Ciel
on November 4, 2013 at 11:55 AM
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