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Very nice!

Under tulip trees

Whose branches slumped

Under the weight of sunshine

Loved this part especially

Be well
-WhiteHat

posted by WhiteHat_TroubleMaker on October 18, 2013 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

great job utah!

posted by Annicita on October 17, 2013 at 7:43 PM | link to this | reply

I like the use of the seasons in this poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 17, 2013 at 7:32 PM | link to this | reply

No trace, but lots of memories.  Well done.    

posted by TAPS. on October 17, 2013 at 7:12 PM | link to this | reply