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Of course I wish you the best of luck! And this is another superb poem - you really must make an attempt (if you haven't already) to make your work available to a wider audience...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 17, 2013 at 4:12 PM
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Good luck Jay...and as always I enjoyed your poem, they are always so descriptive, great job on another great poem!
posted by
MsJudy
on October 17, 2013 at 11:19 AM
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Not going to be a picnic Jay but, but if you put the same effort into this as you do into your poetry, you will make it I am sure.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 17, 2013 at 10:09 AM
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The truth of moving time
Very good. It was like looking through a picture album of former selves. Impressive!
posted by
ForeverPoet
on October 17, 2013 at 7:51 AM
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You do a great job at describing how much things changed over time...I am wishing you luck with this milestone.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 17, 2013 at 5:44 AM
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