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A lot of tense imagery you got here in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 11, 2013 at 10:36 AM
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Nostalgias' sharp knife
You brought me with you into the picture of your memories,
I felt the sharp sting of the refreshing air drawn hard into youthful lungs.
You have a rare gift my friend.
posted by
ForeverPoet
on October 11, 2013 at 8:16 AM
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This is very good - I love the clarity of your iamgery, it's like a brief look into a life I never lived.
posted by
lionreign
on October 11, 2013 at 4:10 AM
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