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brilliant write Jay and I am smiling as I go back for another read.
posted by
Kabu
on October 9, 2013 at 10:40 AM
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I can just see Crybe in action.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 9, 2013 at 9:18 AM
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sounds like my animals
posted by
Lanetay
on October 9, 2013 at 7:47 AM
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Very Clever
Very clear imagery. A sweet and innocent scene that made me smile.
Thank You.
posted by
ForeverPoet
on October 9, 2013 at 7:36 AM
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Utah
LOL! Very well done - I have observed similar scenes in my house, though never written a poem about them...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 9, 2013 at 6:41 AM
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