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Oh but Winter draws close and in fact has come to some places. Rest up Jay, two big days it seems.
posted by
Kabu
on October 5, 2013 at 5:48 PM
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Utah
Great poem - even if I don't exactly need a reminder that winter's not far behind, LOL...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 5, 2013 at 4:49 PM
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UtahJay
àSurrender Jay. BC-A, Bill’s R®ST
posted by
BC-A
on October 5, 2013 at 11:58 AM
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A very awesome poem you got there...Reading this reminds me that winter is around the corner.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 5, 2013 at 10:43 AM
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I quite like this Jay, if I had to crit it I would suggest that you would stick to one theme calling a finch (Mrs) kind of destroys the ambience that would otherwise surround the little bird. Only my veiw of course. Hope you had a good convention take it easy.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 5, 2013 at 10:06 AM
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