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I rather like this. Great work, my friend
posted by
lionreign
on October 4, 2013 at 3:07 AM
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A very good poem for sending a message. I could definitely see myself in it.
Have a good little vacation from Blogit.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 3, 2013 at 6:22 PM
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Yes it is similar in a way Jay. This is the problem of writing poetry perhaps one should write what they mean and not what they think other folk will think. Sadly look at this site there is no one here. Once there was quite an assortment of views and work as you know. A few dribble on and off but rarely comment themselves and so become disillusioned. The answer is in the Wind or so it seems/
posted by
C_C_T
on October 3, 2013 at 12:26 AM
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Oh UtahJ I love your poems it is just that we have too few people on here any more. I am off a lot lately because my health is beating me up a bit. Enjoy tomorrow and be blessed in the Lord.
posted by
Justi
on October 2, 2013 at 11:23 PM
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they need to work more on some pot holes
posted by
Lanetay
on October 2, 2013 at 11:07 PM
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Utah
Your poem all by itself conveyed your meaning very well...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 2, 2013 at 6:05 PM
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the cost of road repairs up here are astronomical...and yes the next year some have to be redone...Oh but that time is fast closing in on us.
posted by
Kabu
on October 2, 2013 at 4:22 PM
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With never ending roadwork on the main road my neighborhood branches off of, I know what you mean.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 2, 2013 at 3:42 PM
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