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Great poem Jay!  Enjoyed reading it very much

posted by MsJudy on September 28, 2013 at 5:50 PM | link to this | reply

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Very poignant...There is always something sad about lost or abandoned toys...

posted by Nautikos on September 28, 2013 at 4:40 PM | link to this | reply

forgotten feeling unloved...poor lost at sea....actually I am reading a book about being lost at sea...you captured that abandoned feeling so well.

posted by Kabu on September 28, 2013 at 3:03 PM | link to this | reply

I often wonder and feel those things when I see those toys at the car wash whether they were accidentally left or deliberately thrown away and look fine.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 28, 2013 at 11:26 AM | link to this | reply

Have we not all felt like that, A little ache for a lost toy.

posted by C_C_T on September 28, 2013 at 10:13 AM | link to this | reply