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This really draws the reader in and holds attention to the end. 
posted by
TAPS.
on September 25, 2013 at 8:26 PM
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Utah
This is powerful and draws you in...
posted by
Nautikos
on September 25, 2013 at 8:17 PM
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i agree with the others...wonderful utah!
posted by
Annicita
on September 25, 2013 at 5:09 PM
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Very nicely done Jay, I enjoyed it very much..
posted by
MsJudy
on September 25, 2013 at 3:12 PM
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well done Jay ....beautifully and sensitively penned.
posted by
Kabu
on September 25, 2013 at 12:09 PM
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hope it was a better journey
posted by
Lanetay
on September 25, 2013 at 11:07 AM
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The images are burned into the speaker's mind.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 25, 2013 at 10:21 AM
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Wow! This is just beautiful Jay.
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on September 25, 2013 at 9:34 AM
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Ethereal and beautiful. Somehow sadness, joy, lack or any human gifts and needs can take on a beauty that is a hurt or a joy when the master of the pen takes hold of it. You did it here.
posted by
Justi
on September 25, 2013 at 9:21 AM
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