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It's quite wonderful the way you can describe things - how long does it take you to write a poem, on average, if you don't mind me asking?

posted by adnohr on September 25, 2013 at 6:52 AM | link to this | reply

Vivid! Great imagery!🌹

posted by shamasehar on September 23, 2013 at 9:31 PM | link to this | reply

i can hear it pinging off the roof

posted by Annicita on September 23, 2013 at 7:28 PM | link to this | reply

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Of course that is Wiley-kins and Graysome and me cuddled up close on a cold wet windy night!!

posted by Kabu on September 23, 2013 at 6:36 PM | link to this | reply

Utah

You had me there experiencing it...

posted by Nautikos on September 23, 2013 at 5:20 PM | link to this | reply

and I could feel the cold hear the rain and just see Graysome cuddling close to us in the bed.

posted by Kabu on September 23, 2013 at 1:34 PM | link to this | reply

You do a great job at building a poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on September 23, 2013 at 11:47 AM | link to this | reply