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UtahJay
Very expressive, forgive that boy who doesn't yet realize he has already been forgiven by He who loves him.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 17, 2013 at 7:51 PM
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Ah but no, Jay. You are in error. Your thumb is definitely green! Wonderful poem!!
posted by
adnohr
on September 17, 2013 at 7:42 PM
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you create wonderful images for me here Jay and that isn't easy to do...Well done.
posted by
Kabu
on September 17, 2013 at 5:49 PM
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very well done utah...love the imagery...
posted by
Annicita
on September 17, 2013 at 5:35 PM
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This poem is rich with powerful metaphors.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 17, 2013 at 2:10 PM
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UtahJay
This is somewhere Jay. BC-A, Bill's R
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posted by
BC-A
on September 17, 2013 at 12:12 PM
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SHADES OF GREY
This is good rap material to be recited out loud and fast without a pause to breathe on a ledge of a high rise buillding on a windy day with impatient crowds down in the street urging you to jump to your death before their lunch hour is over so that they can behold the gory spectacle before going back to their mundane daily routine and have something to talk about for the rest of the month.'Jump!' they shout! 'Over my dead body you say' as you finish and go back into the building to mind your own bussiness.
posted by
Setaki
on September 17, 2013 at 11:59 AM
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This is so wonderful..
posted by
Saif_AlKindi
on September 17, 2013 at 11:39 AM
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Searching for an easy thing is sometimes more difficult than one supposes Jay, some see poppies and others see blood.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 17, 2013 at 11:32 AM
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