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You take us on an emotional roller coaster in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 4, 2013 at 6:53 PM
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Very nice poem Jay, I loved it!
posted by
MsJudy
on September 4, 2013 at 5:03 PM
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You have incredible talent.
posted by
Justi
on September 4, 2013 at 3:46 PM
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I hope you never stop writing poetry. I especially like this one.
I have some catching up to do but, I can't seem to get my energy back right now. The last couple of weeks have been very special but very tiring for me.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 4, 2013 at 2:35 PM
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just now getting back to poetry... i like. 
posted by
Carolyn_Moe
on September 4, 2013 at 2:22 PM
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I admire your original use of words - it's as if you write in a kind
of figrurative language.
posted by
2902
on September 4, 2013 at 2:06 PM
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Ö The ordinary can be seen in light. A bright post Jay 
BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on September 4, 2013 at 1:28 PM
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