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CC, are you saying your mother was at Stonehenge? Wow,
I didn't see her there! And where were you, tooling around in some war chariot looking for a Roman soldier to knock about? And yes, when I fill out a form that asks my religious affiliation I put down "lapsed druid."
posted by
2902
on August 11, 2013 at 6:21 PM
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Re: You got it - painted Celts and Saxons doing or chanting
something weird inside the circle after a hard day of knocking each other around with swords and spears. Yeah, that'd work.
posted by
2902
on August 11, 2013 at 6:13 PM
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Re: Dr J,you probably got everything I said the first time -
there's no hidden meaning, just a moment or situation I tried to find words for. I personally mistrust and dislike abstruse poetry.
posted by
2902
on August 11, 2013 at 6:09 PM
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Re: You really don,'t know what happens next, but your pencil has
a rough idea.
posted by
2902
on August 11, 2013 at 4:48 PM
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Re: You mean the composition process? I don't do it
ofgten enough!
posted by
2902
on August 11, 2013 at 4:46 PM
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Re: Re: It's sort of passive - you have an instinct of sorts for what
(Ooops) will keep the flow going and what will not.
posted by
2902
on August 11, 2013 at 4:45 PM
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Re: It's sort of passive - you have an instinct of sorts for what
posted by
2902
on August 11, 2013 at 4:44 PM
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Re: I like the imagery,
It was an interesting place to imagine myself being. Never having been there, I could do whatever I wanted!
posted by
2902
on August 11, 2013 at 4:43 PM
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Loveing it and isn't it exciting when something just flows. Wonder if there will be more of druids and feasts dancing and perhaps a war.
posted by
Kabu
on August 11, 2013 at 4:35 PM
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I must read again. At times I am too literal that I miss messages in poetry.t
posted by
Dr_JPT
on August 11, 2013 at 3:53 PM
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interesting... I know how it is when the pen leads your thoughts... xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on August 11, 2013 at 2:55 PM
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It happens to me all the time...I like it.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 11, 2013 at 9:54 AM
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I like the experimental process you tried here. It flowed very well.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 11, 2013 at 9:36 AM
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Bob my Mother felt it and hated it . I have felt it and rather liked the feeling one turns into stone but it feels soft. Nothing to do with your poem of course perhaps you were a Druid in a previous time. Are you growing a long white beard or do you keep making strange incantations when frustrated. Example B***** H*****.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 11, 2013 at 7:51 AM
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I like the imagery,
you put me there very easy.
posted by
SomeoneElse
on August 11, 2013 at 7:15 AM
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