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Good drama Jay better test the brakes
posted by
C_C_T
on August 8, 2013 at 11:32 AM
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Some powerful end of times imagery there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 8, 2013 at 10:11 AM
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Jay..its very true it can be "lights out" for any one of us, any day...
Your poem packs a real punch..
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posted by
Rumor
on August 8, 2013 at 8:28 AM
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Halfway down through the poem, I was ready to start quoting you that Bible verse about, "While the earth remaineth....". Then I was glad to see that you didn't need me to do that at all.
posted by
TAPS.
on August 8, 2013 at 2:31 AM
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In that sense, I guess the Earth ends thousands of times each day,
doesn't it!
posted by
2902
on August 8, 2013 at 2:25 AM
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WOW!! And double WOW! Where did that come from?? it left me...breathless!
posted by
adnohr
on August 7, 2013 at 11:35 PM
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This is nice..
posted by
Saif_AlKindi
on August 7, 2013 at 11:33 PM
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