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Re: jfm32

Thank you so much

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 10:10 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Blue_feathers

me too...

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: TAPS

That mood rarely catches me able to write but I know what you mean

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 8:13 AM | link to this | reply

Re: BC-A

yes, here too

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 8:12 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Rumor

I rarely object to a few minutes extra sleep

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Sinome

Thank you sweetie xoxoxox

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 8:10 AM | link to this | reply

Re: UtahJay

thank you Jay

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 8:09 AM | link to this | reply

Re: C_C_T

Thank you

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 8:06 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

hahah then you know how I felt

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FormerStudentIntern

Thank you

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 8:02 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Saif_AlKindi

thank you

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 8:01 AM | link to this | reply

Re: lovelyladymonk

Thank you

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 7:58 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Dr_JPT

I think we meditate the same way...  I also sleep

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 7:48 AM | link to this | reply

Re: 2902

Thank you.  I think that's partly because I find endings the most difficult part

posted by lionreign on August 16, 2013 at 7:45 AM | link to this | reply

a fresh and enjoyable read and quite unexpected

posted by jfm32 on August 13, 2013 at 8:29 AM | link to this | reply

 sleepy...

posted by Blue_feathers on August 8, 2013 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

That is exactly how it is.....except when you really need to get some sleep and your eyes won't close.

posted by TAPS. on August 8, 2013 at 3:37 AM | link to this | reply

lionreign

PIt’s wet and heavy some days. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on August 7, 2013 at 4:01 PM | link to this | reply

lionreign..

An unexpected naptime is always a good thing, and with a touch of dream thrown in, even better....

posted by Rumor on August 7, 2013 at 10:25 AM | link to this | reply

Beautifully expressed my friend... Nothing better than an erotic surprise in an unexpected nap :-)  xoxoxo

posted by Sinome on August 6, 2013 at 9:07 PM | link to this | reply

I love naps, and I loved this poem.

posted by UtahJay on August 6, 2013 at 8:21 PM | link to this | reply

Really nice in a dreamy kind if way. Well done Lion.

posted by C_C_T on August 6, 2013 at 12:21 PM | link to this | reply

snore snore....Uh! Oh, lovely poem...made me just drop off!!

posted by Kabu on August 6, 2013 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

I like how this builds up to falling asleep.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 6, 2013 at 9:33 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely..

posted by Saif_AlKindi on August 6, 2013 at 9:13 AM | link to this | reply

Great stuff my friend...

posted by lovelyladymonk on August 6, 2013 at 8:48 AM | link to this | reply

Peaceful and relaxing.  I have attempted meditation.  I fall asleep and lose the benefit of the focus by an unexpected nap.  Nice poem.

posted by Dr_JPT on August 6, 2013 at 6:25 AM | link to this | reply

Very clever little poem - I love the opening image and the

unexpected rhyme at the end of line three!  The rhythm throws me a little at the end.

posted by 2902 on August 6, 2013 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply