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I always had a passion for Composition notebooks. I really like what you did with yours. You turned out good!
posted by
TAPS.
on August 2, 2013 at 8:45 PM
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such pictures that you painted with your words....just lovely Thank you Jay.
posted by
Kabu
on August 2, 2013 at 4:38 PM
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Great poem Jay! I enjoyed it very much!
posted by
MsJudy
on August 2, 2013 at 2:48 PM
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If it wasn't for the cattle being fattened for slaughter, this poem would set me in a place I love to go on occasion - alone, surrounded by wild nature.
posted by
adnohr
on August 2, 2013 at 1:18 PM
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Lovely...
posted by
Saif_AlKindi
on August 2, 2013 at 11:07 AM
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You do a great job at conveying the impending doom...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 2, 2013 at 10:49 AM
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Nostalgic poem Jay more Dylan Thomas than a lot.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 2, 2013 at 10:45 AM
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