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Re: I remember you saying you were in a group.

posted by 2902 on July 31, 2013 at 5:51 AM | link to this | reply

I havent read for such a long time...Great post Bob.

posted by UtahJay on July 30, 2013 at 11:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: CC, I hope someone does. Yes, the oral poetry is a lot of fun. Next

Saturday we're having a haiku slam (i.e. competition) in Suffern, and we'll probably have about 50 people (a lot come just to listen, which is pretty remarkable!)  My opener is going to be the one I posted a few days ago:

                                                           'Jever stop to think,

                                                           and then forget to start again?

                                                              What was I saying?

If it's read right, the listeners don't realize that "That was the poem."  and think you're really absent-minded. Two other good ones are

                                                          She was at that age

                                                           when the Girl Scout you once knew

                                                           becomes a cookie.

and

                                              Know that look when she

                                              says "No" but really means "Yes?"

                                              - Dude, I don't either.

posted by 2902 on July 30, 2013 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

Re:Define "pretty ordinary."

posted by 2902 on July 30, 2013 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you for your kind visit.

posted by 2902 on July 30, 2013 at 6:46 PM | link to this | reply

Re: We try to say it well. One of the things you come to realize is that

there's no repeating - you have to say it right and say it clear.

posted by 2902 on July 30, 2013 at 6:45 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Bob..

Rumor, I'll say this - you meet some interesting prople!  It's a fun experience!

posted by 2902 on July 30, 2013 at 6:42 PM | link to this | reply

would love to take my pretty ordinary work down there and have a go then listen to real poets like you read for me.

posted by Kabu on July 30, 2013 at 2:46 PM | link to this | reply

Someone will probably copy it one day. Stll doing it then Bob.  

posted by C_C_T on July 30, 2013 at 11:50 AM | link to this | reply

posted by Saif_AlKindi on July 30, 2013 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

It is all in how we say it.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 30, 2013 at 9:51 AM | link to this | reply

Bob..

Sounds like a great place to hang out on a Friday night...and your poem is the perfect invitation...

posted by Rumor on July 30, 2013 at 9:24 AM | link to this | reply