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this is amazing! Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on July 21, 2013 at 8:16 PM
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I am a little spooked...
Very nice work!
posted by
SomeoneElse
on July 21, 2013 at 2:40 PM
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I sometimes go to sleep in the happy present but wake up in the unhappy past. I am trying to move on....wonderful piece of work dear Jay.
posted by
Kabu
on July 21, 2013 at 10:58 AM
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Utah
This is really very good...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 21, 2013 at 10:38 AM
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A good mix of wonder here not too frightening.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 21, 2013 at 10:37 AM
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Reading this poem reminds me that our past stays with us.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 21, 2013 at 10:15 AM
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Liked the way you write..
posted by
Saif_AlKindi
on July 21, 2013 at 10:05 AM
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I am like Alice crawl in a hole and forget the world around me
posted by
Lanetay
on July 21, 2013 at 9:15 AM
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