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I wouldn't said void of feelings, Jay. There was many feelings in this poem; they linger in old buildings too.
posted by
adnohr
on July 18, 2013 at 6:43 AM
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you break my heart sometimes my dear friend. Just so vivid.
posted by
Kabu
on July 17, 2013 at 8:55 PM
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Soulful and aching
posted by
calia14
on July 17, 2013 at 4:28 PM
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Jay
Wonderful writing, sad thoughts, regrets and remorse but it is beautifully conveyed before putting it away forever.
posted by
Justi
on July 17, 2013 at 1:37 PM
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Looks like my old chicken farm Jay
. seems like a blown mood today . keep writing.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 17, 2013 at 11:29 AM
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Excellent writing! I sense the sadness... the bitter-sweet feelings ... Going back is never easy but it is something we are lucky to be able to do. Enjoy your trip my friend xoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on July 17, 2013 at 10:15 AM
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The house symbolizes a wide variety of moments...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 17, 2013 at 9:32 AM
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