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You are showing much growth as a poet, it seems to me. 
posted by
TAPS.
on July 17, 2013 at 6:57 AM
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I really enjoyed your poem.
posted by
MsJudy
on July 16, 2013 at 5:32 PM
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Sinome
Lovely poem and that old man would have been great for her earlier in life., we old men are sharp.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 16, 2013 at 1:45 PM
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Wonderful work Sanome. I am having such a hard time here in Denver/Golden, Colorado trying to post and comment, if I can't get it to work please know that I am trying to read and comment on my friends, like you, and at the very least know that I am reading for that is the one thing that seems to work right.
posted by
UtahJay
on July 16, 2013 at 12:58 PM
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It is sad that they were not able to work things out.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 16, 2013 at 11:16 AM
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Sinome
Ah yes, the sorrows and futility of a May-December love - very insightful...
posted by
Nautikos
on July 15, 2013 at 9:11 PM
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oh my! You truly know love, bless you!
posted by
Blue_feathers
on July 15, 2013 at 8:47 PM
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oh! sad but wise...very wise to understand that they could not make this work. Oh but i love your work.
posted by
Kabu
on July 15, 2013 at 7:37 PM
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