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I have known of a few women who have made such an impression on their significant other's life.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on July 11, 2013 at 10:31 AM | link to this | reply

what a nice love affair

posted by Lanetay on July 11, 2013 at 8:11 AM | link to this | reply

I agree with everyone else . . . the word arrogant seems to throw the whole concept out of balance a bit. Could she have really been just strong-willed?

posted by JimmyA on July 11, 2013 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Good , but he can keep her Jay.  

posted by C_C_T on July 11, 2013 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

I like this.  It takes a strong man, sure of himself and wise, to love and live with an arrogant woman.  Not every man can do it.

posted by TAPS. on July 11, 2013 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

I liked the way of expresing your ideas here...

 

posted by Saif_AlKindi on July 11, 2013 at 2:39 AM | link to this | reply

Yes - that word threw me off too, Jay. It made me see the poem in a different light; I don't believe you are talking about a person here, are you?

posted by adnohr on July 10, 2013 at 9:57 PM | link to this | reply

UtahJay

She was arrogant? You wrote a winner with an arrogant partner in it? Divorce in the wind there.

posted by WileyJohn on July 10, 2013 at 9:20 PM | link to this | reply