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Such a happy scene you painted with words, especially with getting to play the organ. I did not see the twist at the end coming. You have me wondering what really went on at the house.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 10, 2013 at 9:32 AM
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interesting ending
posted by
Lanetay
on July 10, 2013 at 8:43 AM
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Always write about what you know Jay you have a wealth of memories sorry not to have been around lately I get these disinterested feelings about fantasy, it will pass,
posted by
C_C_T
on July 10, 2013 at 1:15 AM
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Perfectly captured the yearning to turn something bad into something good. As a helpless child, I wonder how many times we would feel that emotion, because it's the only escape we had? Great poem, Jay!
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adnohr
on July 9, 2013 at 11:53 PM
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UtaJ
What a wonderfully protrayed piece of life until the end and we know that was not the story at all. You are such a good poet. May God Bless you.
posted by
Justi
on July 9, 2013 at 9:47 PM
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UtahJay
Well portrayed Jay.
posted by
WileyJohn
on July 9, 2013 at 9:21 PM
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These poems of yours lately should be compiled into a book.... Bravo!
posted by
Sinome
on July 9, 2013 at 9:15 PM
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